All Comments on 'Breaking the Rules Pt. 03'

I love it all!

The only thing I don't like... is that I'll have to wait at least a couple more weeks to read another chapter.

Fun and interesting as always, but how did Nuru get that Entrancement from Sanaa while wearing that amulet?

Speaking of her casting Entrancement, why can he cast some of the spells she used on his own, but not that one?

If you could all pretend it’s explained that Nuru dropped the amulet as he approached the rhinopotamus and then collected after its capture was complete (as was intended, and established as possible in the library scene), I’d consider it a personal favor. My alpha reader didn’t catch it missing either. No points are awarded for an anonymous tip, though- thanks for playing :P

Instead I'll give a freebie point of clarification: the amulet is interfering with the communication, EXP award, and MP transfer aspects of the pact, but as long as Nuru is pulling his own MP he can still cast any of Sanaa's spells he knows the incantation for. First cast of Entrancement in Bending the Rules was silent, so he didn't know the incantation and was forced to ask. Fumnaya probably should have explained most of this, but apparently she had a few things on her mind at that ridiculously early hour, may not even have slept at all, and Nuru was trying to keep his promise not to ask questions.

That one was awesome as always. You really know how to write exciting and entertaining stories. It always brings me back to the days when I used to read and play AD&D and games like Wizardry on my Apple II+. Thanks for another great chapter and another stroll down memory lane.

J.D.

Thanks for the explanation below . So does that mean that neither Nuru or Sanaa are getting any of the earned EXP and MP or any benefits from Nuru's encounters ? None ? Or will it all come crashing down on the two of them . Once the amulet is destroyed ?