All Comments on 'Breaking the Rules Pt. 07'

Enjoying the growing closeness of these characters. It takes time and honesty; glad to see them doing both.

Thank you for your story. You and yours Be well.

This is one of your most fun chapters. It had so much action that you couldn’t tell who was attacking what and why for. I like how Dayo and Faraha played their trick on Nuru. It is nice that Ace found someone even with all his preferences and that the someone is a Mermaid who seems just as happy as he is to have found someone to possibly love. I gave up many chapters back with trying to figure out who is trying to screw over who and what some of the motives are (aside from greed that is) behind some of the stranger things going on. You manage to pack so much goings on in a chapter that it is easier just to sit back and enjoy the ride. Thanks as usual for all you put into these works of yours because it does come through.

J.D.

I second jpz's sentiments. Can't wait for part 8!

Sooo... what does this "Master level" shirt *_do?_*

The shirt is not heavy armor, but it's got good piercing and slash resistance for its weight, and looks good to support charisma-based spells and modifiers.