by SunsetFollower511
Kind of an awkward beat to end a chapter on, but I'll gladly take it. That final scene is even missing any kind of explanation for *why* a succubus would want horns. Like... what good do they do her? Is it *just* for aesthetics, or do they supply some kind of mechanical benefit?
Speaking of missing / lacking explanations, what do our protagonists expect to gain from the labyrinth they discussed? My best guess is just the whole "The powers-that-be are really secretive about it, so it *must* be good" idea. But that strikes me as being a bit too flimsy to take much risks for, so idk....
I'll be eagerly awaiting more action scenes, this time presumably showcasing what Nuru can do to support a sneaky thief. -- Speaking of which, Nuru really needs to get buy some more spells / skills of his own already. It's too bad his pact didn't have any "I get 1% of the EXP gained from my sexual experiences" clause; he'd probably already be level 13 by now.
Lmao at the Nuru massage punchline. It's even more hilarious cuz you took 20 chapters to get to it!
Love the story, 5 stars easily. Can't wait for more!
Goddammit, you were chuckling about that joke as you published the very first chapter, weren't you...
Love the story. Sorry for the short comment.
Thank you for your writings. You and yours Be well.
I have finely caught up . every chapter is a 5 star. and as others have stated I have been waiting for the NURU Massage to come forward in the story. Well played. THank you for sharing with us and I am so waiting for the next installment. Be well.