All Comments on 'Breast Enlargement'

Another brilliant story! Loved it. One small critique, if I may... you didn't describe her hair colour until veeery much later on. I thought she was blonde the whole time until you wrote she had black hair a long time later. Try and describe her early...or...not mention any description and leave it to the individual reader to impose their own fantasy woman/imagination. That's it really. Very minor but it was quickly forgotten because the story itself was first class once again and captivating throughout!

I really enjoyed the writing style. There is much attention paid to every detail and there are many moments of suspense that keeps the reader alive and wanting more.

Loved your story, write more