All Comments on 'Breathe'

by elledee

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
interesting...

i'm intrigued. can't wait to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
coming inside her, despite her explicit wishes: uncool and unsexy.

Otherwise, I liked it.

FirediamondFirediamondabout 9 years ago
Hmmm

What's her problem?

KenyabKenyabover 6 years ago

Wow.. Reminds me of someone. Lol. This is written so realistically. You did a fantastic job!

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