All Comments on 'Bred Wee, to Serve Ch. 01'

There are all kinds of people. I should be shocked that you're into lesbian midget domination, but frankly, your story was written in such a bland way that the shock never had a chance to register. I could have been reading the financial section of a newspaper. Even within the confines of the story, the over-all impression was of two people sitting at a table with a script, running through their lines. The lack of details, broad or small, aside from what the midget 'recited' left this as exciting as a bowl of tepid vanilla pudding.