All Comments on 'Breed Me'

by Smuttyandfun

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Excellent employee benefits!

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Ravey19Ravey19about 1 year ago

Sweet unexpected love story, so pleased it worked out.

SpotInTheSandSpotInTheSandabout 1 year ago

Another outstanding tale! Keep up the great work!

Ian_SnowIan_Snowabout 1 year ago

Love it! Always up for a well written breeding kink story and this was exceptional.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

A nice way to start the week with a happily ever after!

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601about 1 year ago

A well written romance, as always. Not a criticism, but an observation: Your MATURE stories seem to be getting a bit formulaic. Unstated love, misunderstandings of same, denial of same, reconciliation of same, wedded bliss, happy family, etc. Obviously we all enjoy them, but don’t you feel the need to stretch yourself as a writer?

Oh, while the Scottish dialect is often misidentified as a “brogue” that term is actually specific to the Irish lilting dialect. The Scottish dialect is called a “burr” defined by it’s plosive consonants and rolling R’s. There’s a difference. [Linguistics lesson over]

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 1 year ago

AWWWWW Better than the HallMark Channel! Such a sweet story! 5 stars! And they lived happily ever after...That is my only complain...it should have said "and they lived happily ever after" at the end. Left me smiling if not crying. Such a sweet story, great writing, great story, great effort. AND a hotel connected to the building. LOL don't even have to go out side to get a room. Sweet! Very nice story. Thank you for your effort.

Good job. Thanks BUSTER2U

PickFictionPickFictionabout 1 year ago

As always, a well-known and well-written story. An unusual plot device, but it works out in the end.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

More of a Romance than Mature, but really excellent in either case. Thanks 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good romance.

PickFictionPickFictionabout 1 year ago

My comment was meant to say "well-told" and not "well-known."

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for taking the time to read this. And thank you for your kind comments, which are always appreciated.

LingeringAfterthoughtLingeringAfterthoughtabout 1 year ago

Another S&F classic! Congratulations - and good luck in the contest!

OldbutboldOldbutboldabout 1 year ago
5 stars

I think this is the first time reading your work , but it wont be the last , fantastic story without the stupid 10 inch cocks and 56HH boobs .

This was a story written with feeling and love interest , which is often missing with other stories ,

Thankyou for the time you take to write for us the readers .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A very nice and brilliant tale of two people discovering love that has always been there! Happy ever after is always so great to read. Thanks for sharing. 5-Stars!

BlissMaraBlissMaraabout 1 year ago

I enjoyed the romance and sweetness of this story. Sometimes, we just need to read a feel good story, and the sexy parts make it all the more enjoyable! 5 big stars 🌟

roveroneroverone11 months ago

Liked it a lot-you painted a great picture of their hot bodies, and potent breeding...

no mention but hopefully she also has a lush neatly trimmed brunette muffin...

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Why the fuck do people name their children after their mothers/fathers/grandparents!!!

Give the child their own identity

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Very well written,loved it. Sweet romance.

mitchawamitchawa3 months ago

Nicely done with an interesting plot and well-described characters, with good dialogue. and an excellent sex scene. Well written with a twist on the boss and girl Friday. Five years were lost to convention, but true love was found.

wwaldripwwaldrip2 months ago

Excellent story enjoyed reading it and enjoyed the characters

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