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Click hereNow I wondered what Christy would think, if I told her that I had a few more ladies to take care of that we were counting on me to get them pregnant.
Guess I'd find out in the morning, when I had to break the news.
But at least for tonight, I could hold her and imagine what it might be like to actually have someone to call my own.
LOL these armchair wanna be literary critics are funny little people. Reminds me of Theodore Roosevelt's "the role of the critic" ..aka "the man in the arena". Fuck them I just want MORE CHAPTERS. Harems always good.
So are bull is now going to fall in love with a woman who let him breed her just because he'll fix her car.
Keep your storyline straight: It was "a good 9 inches and thic"; but in part 5 it's now 8 in. Your trying too hard to get so many stories started, up and running, and completed that you can't do any of them full justice. So what started out as a good 5, became just a 4 in the end.
I've read all five stories and liked them all. You're a good writer, with a different plot, and interesting internal and external dialogue. However, I think there are a number of problems. The entire personal breeding concept started too quickly. Two, the word-of-mouth spreading is not likely to happen as quickly as quickly as you suggest.
Three, not every female what to have intimate relations with a man they don't know. by Inimate I mean kissing, French kissing, fellatio, and cunnilingus. In reality, most of these practices don't begin until an affair has been. established. Four, some men would like their wife's bread but not be made love to. It's one thing to breed a female, but it's another to make love to them. I suspect, most guys would prefer to "warm" up their wives and have the bull penetrate and ejaculate. In and out, quick and simple. Fifth, although you do a good job of changing each situation, but to me there was too much repetition. Of course, these are all my opinions and you can ignore them.
Please keep going with this storyline. Perhaps he can marry the redhead and keep breeding women with her support?
Great story line and good installment. Please keep this fantasy going.
Cheers
SAGE
Thanks to everyone who's been enjoying this fun little series. Your votes and comments are much appreciated.