All Comments on 'Breeding the Help Ch. 04'

Honestly I love it, an amazing mix of hot and horny, coupled with some real emotion and real human characters. Always helps when it plays to my breeding kink as well.

Amazing series. Wonderfully written and wildly erotic.

Hot chapter. Should have had a cute chapter with the two of them being adorable. maybe working on baby 3

I'm genuinely surprised Joy did have sex with him and get knocked up as well. Still it's a great smut story.

I was pleasantly surprised to learn that you updated this story after all these years Depravio. I appreciate that you took the time to focus on Carl's character development and that Mariah's background was fleshed out. Thank you for this well done conclusion.

Ha. Nice way to show character growth there with the little Joy interlude.

I enjoy the way this one wrapped up. I wouldn't have minded if it went in a different direction, or if you include little snippets and epilogues down the line, but I left feeling satisfied. Your writing is enjoyable to read and better than 95% of the stuff on Lit. Professional quality stuff. I am grateful that you are sharing this with us for free.

You also have me questioning whether I'm secretly a racist from how numb I've grown to the the term "white dick"

Loved this lone chapter back years ago and love it even more now.

Exemplifies the "wholesome lewdness" beat perfectly. Perfect amount of sweet and spicy. :)

I would encourage you to keep writing in this world. I want to know how Carl and Maria take on growing parenthood, support themselves (States or Philippines?), what dreams they pursue (besides a big loving family), and perhaps reign in another broodmares in Joy...

But it could also end wonderfully now. And that's the point: a wonderfully satisfying story from beginning to end.

Please continue your writing and talents. There's not a lot out there with a spirit like yours. Cheers!

Simply one of the best stories I've ever read. Very hot, and very well written. I really cared about the characters. Fantastic.

Great ending to the story. Will you be making other stories in the future?

Fucking hell my friend. This was by far one of, if not the best, stories I have read period. The amount of description, the amount of growth Carl goes through, the raw passion between him and Maria, the descriptions of him and her exulting in her pregnancy and breeding. Incredibly well written and had me sucked in entirely. I found myself coming back to your page more than once over these last months after the 3rd part was posted because I wanted more. I still do honestly; I could see Carl and Maria roping Joy in too. More kids, more pregnancies, as they get their lives together in their village. But then again, this ending was so beautiful I don't want to ruin that haha. In any case, you definitely have a follow from me because of this story.

I loved the story, and especially the transformation Maria helped work into Carl. What a stellar way to end and I couldn't think of any other possibility except this one.

I remembered when this was a one shot story. The fact you came back and expanding on this and this good. I'm glad you came back and finished this story and I enjoyed it. Thank you!

I'm not crying, you're crying!

You, to put it simply, are a god. I can't remember how often I read your first chapter when it came out, wishing that you would tell us what happened next. And now that you have, I don't think there's going to be a tale on this site that will ever top it--and as I'm sure you'd agree, there's some damn good stories on this site. "Breeding the Help" is hot as fuck, but it also gives us real flesh-and-blood characters as opposed to the cookie-cutter ones we so often see in stories of this type. Please continue your writing efforts; I have no doubt we'll be seeing your name--real or pseudo--on some published books, someday! Good luck, and thanks for this incredible tale!

I kinda wish we could get more stories like this. Perhaps another chapter or a story connected to it like a spin off?

Amazing work! However, I can't get Joy out of my head now. I can definitely see the sisters conspiring to get pregnant at the same time!

Thank you all! This series was a true labor of love. I have many more works of hot, sex-soaked passion and depravity to share. Joy’s part in Breeding the Help isn’t finished either…

Hahhahahahahaha im your fan!!!!!! I shall anticipate in your new work!!!! ♡♡

Thoroughly loved this story. I hope it continues!!

I figured it would be a “fuck em and forget em” story and loved how it turned out. Never lacked for sexy, and overwhelming with love.

This is an amazing story, one of my most favorite. I am happy for the happy ending. I guess Carl moved permanently to Maria's village? How did they live their life then?

I'm looking forward to Joy's next story.

I'm a reader and that's what pushed me to literotica to get more... "pleasure"! I rarely like or comment any stories here though, but I have to say this has been the best that I've read on this platform so far! Please do continue with Joy's stories or any other stories too!

a writer myself i try to pour my heart in my works. this breaks even that. the series is a decade old. people have waited so dilligently for it. i first read it when 4th part was already out. i feared i would have to wait to. but seeing that end came so quick, the tears never dried on the 10th page. this writing style is amazing. the depth of knowledge fabulous. we rarely see and find stories that have hearts poured in by writer in such quantity and quality that we the reader are forced to pour our tears. the end was anti climatic. never in a million years have a story emerged which is so normal yet so exquisite, so true yet so far far off. to depravio i have no words left in arsenal for appreciation you deserve. writing a story in exquisite use of twisting words and writing a series with such heartfelt plot are two things of different worlds. you mate opened the path to the other world which is so beautiful. the only words of appreciation i have left for this to commemorate is this one shall be engraved in the thread of times for futures to come.

Bravooooo

I’ve never read any erotic literature as good as this. You blew it out of the water, thank you for coming back to finish this. It seems like we share a lot of the same fantasies, you articulated them so well. Looking forward to the next project, cheers!

What a fantastic and beautiful story.

I came for the smut, but stayed for the story. This was beautiful, but so real that it hurt. Thank you for sharing your life.

I'm glad you came back to this story. A little mistranslations here and there but love the story. Looking forward to more of your stuff.

I've never cried from an erotica story before. This was too beautiful and sweet. Bless you

Loved it, well done.