All Comments on 'Breeding the Pony Girl Pt. 03'

And they get their nipples pierced too. Risky business signing into a slave market. That is after all where slaves are routinely sold. Great story.

Awesome story! Keep writing!

Awesome- I am assuming the night wranglers may go beyond the norm and both of them may end up ass fucked before their night is through.

You have to love the slave market. You can't imagine the trouble a girl can get into there.

Very enjoyable story.

Great story. Looking forward to the next chapter where hopefully they both get some slave anal sex. Or, is it just called slave sex.

Offering a sample suck by Mary was brilliant on Bill’s part for setting the tone. Great story.

Jeez, this women is unbelievable and now she's talked her employee/friend into this stupid stunt. Does she really think no one will find out. I also can't believe Mary's husband would go along with it

The contrived nature of the "you can't just get graded, you have to actually become a slave" and the "there's no way to undo a wrongful enslavement" plot points always broke immersion for me when reading Brad's other stories, especially when they were central to the narrative. Seeing that kind of acknowledged and addressed here makes me happy. Well, hopefully they don't try to spring it again.

Really loving the story after Lois’s first adventure into the slave world she just comes up with another crazy about getting branded now so what happens after this now how far will this piece of slave meat go?

Nice sequel. Looking forward to reading the next part.

Walking on a fine line ….. as i have no idea how the Longhorn slave market business is settled, if there are actions for breaking the longhorn rules while processing so breaking the contract in general , so the slave could be sold even then the entry coding wasn’t verified for the sale …. This will be the ultimate frill