All Comments on 'Breeding the Pony Girl Pt. 12'

by Carl_Bradford

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HargaHargaalmost 3 years ago

I knew something like this was going to happen. After everything every body talked to her about she still couldn't help herself. I know this is your story but don't let her off easy. She deserves what ever happens. I'm not sure I really want to read it. I really think she's flushed her life down a toilet and will probably enjoy being a 24/7 fuck slave.

Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

what a great twist to the story, bravo!

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 3 years ago

Dang, Carl. You're scaring the bejabbers out of me. I really, really hope that this is a trick by her friends to wake her the hell up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

great twist and I hope, in the short term, it isn't just Richard trying to teach her a lesson. The lesson will sink in so much better if she is actually kidnapped and later rescued

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I wonder if this is how some fox hunts begin; first steal a fox. Very troubling turn of events that I hope is not the ending to a very risky erotic tale. Please don't end it too soon.

jackie_emjackie_emalmost 3 years ago

Kind of a dark turn. One presumes Hallie will tell Mary what happened and that Mary will contact Richard. One hopes Richard will have the contacts to track Ginger down and buy her. I'd think his condition to her is that she sign a FINO contract which will let him control her Pony Girl activities.

Glad you addressed the ex-husband. I felt he had to be able to figure it out, but glad Lois shut him down.

NnnelsonNnnelsonover 2 years ago

Just loved the idea of “rustlers” kidnapping Ginger. The writing is on the wall concerning where Lois should end up. I look forward to the next chapter. It would be great fun it Lois ended up in a fox hunt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I bet it was the rancher who tried to buy “Ginger” at the Slave Expo from Abby Rider that grabbed her. Hopefully Richard finds her before it is too late.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 1 year ago

A true real life kidnapping must be overloading the sensual system with fear, absolutely perversion, so ginger may in for that …… are we able to think rational at time? …… now kidnapping in a bdsm content, meeting some, unknown place, darkness, like a blind date kidnapping and not knowing him and the place you will be abused - this sounds exciting 😳 ….. so your idea is exciting, we will see what happened to ginger

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