All Comments on 'Breeding the Pony Girl Pt. 13'

Awesome! Just wish the story could go on!

When I thought about it, I realized that the kidnapping was likely a setup with Richard running it with the cooperation of Mary and Hailie.

Great conclusion to a superbly written series.

Another great story brought to a happily ever after conclusion. It has been a real honor collaborating with you on this story. I have learned so much watching as you developed this masterpiece.

Excellent ending to a well written series. 5 stars

Should do an alternate ending when she's been kidnapped that she is found months to years later and so far gone that she can't be helped & kept as a pony girl. Lol

A beautiful ending to a marvelous story!

I have read and re-read this story and each time I have placed myself within a different character; thank you for fueling some wonderful erotic images. Great story.

Great chapter and writing, and if “Happily Ever-after” was the goal, you seceded. I normally don't like reading about people getting used and abused in a story. Especially good or Innocent characters. I was disappointed that she didn't get her just deserts though. She flaunted her safety repeatedly with no real consequences putting other peoples jobs and businesses at risk. I have no problem with her exploring her submissive and erotic fantasies but like everything it must be done with control.

Cheers

I truly enjoyed this story. Never once feeling like it was too long or too much repeating. I will be looking at reading your other stories. Thank you for the fun adventure

One of my favorite stories. The idea of a woman who is interested in being a filly is really wonderful. A development where things get complicated is a cool direction. I would love to read similar stories. Stories in which curiosity leads the woman to the breeding station. If anyone knows similar stories, I will be grateful for their titles

"Ream My Ass!"

What a way to end a pefect story.

Fantastic read and so would love to hear more even a short story on the ex slave handler turn pony herself..

I adore all of these stories and I've spent days reading them. Such quality never gets old!

Really liked all 13 parts. Wish if you did a pt 14 you would get Hailie and Mary have sex with her too.

Mary and Hailie should still get their chance to play with the boss lady that’s a new wife and FINO.

I think Hailie as a black woman deserves a chance if that white girls pussy..

really good series, kudos to the author!

hope you'll be writing some more pony girl stories..

Great story, well written, very enjoyable and I love the romance side.

This was an absolutely fantastic story it was extremely well written I had a really hard time getting my nose out of this story!!! Carl_Bradford you wrote a really amazing story keep up the amazing work.

Happy ending ….. thank you for joining this trip

Wonderful story, thanks for taking us on this trip.

Great story. I could see a side story. Mary and/ Bill made another bet with Moria and Sylvia and lost again. So they were just getting ready to take her back to their ranch for maybe a full week. Maybe Mary eventually ends up with her own FINO with her husband. Of course at some point Moria and Sylvia lose a bet and spend an extended weekend at the Spinning Wheel and at some point they get used by the male and female staff and of course Stud gets to breed them both.