- Fetish
- Bree's Journey Pt. 01
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I hovered my finger over the message. I could delete it without even listening to it. That would be permanent. Instead, I just locked the phone and tossed it in my open duffel.
I'll deal with it later.
That was the last thing I remember before falling asleep.
- COMMENTS
njstumpjumperover 1 year agoGreat story, well written and not at all predictable! I appreciate your thought process and the twists and turns you weave into your story. You’re now one of my favorite writers.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoGood stuff, I was convinced that Miles was going to be the way Bree was going to go, but now I'm not so sure, guess I'll find out in the next chapter.
lenmc02091964over 4 years agoGoes to my favorite list. Great story with a complex story line. Can’t wait to read more.
Anonymousabout 8 years agoSee above.
JudyLeeover 8 years agoThat's the best way to describe this story. Bree's fear of commitment; Mike's deceit to her; Nancy's complicty. Daniel and his 'coming out', Kieran's secret. I'm anxious to see where it is going.
Anonymousover 8 years agoSo many kinks and fetishes touched on and with such aplomb. Your writing is exquisite! I'm in awe and jealous.
Anonymousover 8 years agoWhat a captivating story! A long one too, and I am not sure how I stumbled onto it (probably after a frustrating superbowl) , but Lord knows I am thankful I did. You kept my attention from start to finish. Normally I read four or five books at a time, and am writing the same number of stories. So many started but not finished, alas. But I dropped everything to finish this one. You truly are a gifted writer. Whether that comes from experience or imagination, or a combination of both (If it's multiple choice, I am checking 'C') is up for debate. Please keep writing. And writing, and writing. You deserve to be paid for what you do. Thank you Dakota. I will be reading much more of you, MUCH more. Cheers, E.
Anonymousover 8 years agoWonderfully written. Loved all of it, but I need more. It seems you have left it open for a part 2. (I hope) Really need to know if she ends things with Miles. I think she should stick it out. I mean they really need to discuss how she is feeling and see if they can make some concessions to make everyone happy. Think they would be happy all together with a child.
