All Comments on 'Brenda!!!'

by OldThunder

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
bad back to physically active sex in a shower?

Kinda abrupt says this guy w/experience

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 13 years ago
Interesting beginning

your story was good and is definitely a beginning to another chapter. Brenda coming back into his life will definitely make for a good continuation and you can go into more detail about why the correspondence and contact stopped.

And anything is possible in a shower as long as it's big enough to accomodate both.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice story, needs editing

I liked the story. It could have used editing for spelling errors.

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