All Comments on 'Brenda's Affair'

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SensuousmindSensuousmind12 months ago

Excellent story! It had me moist and thinking of some of my own escapades similar to this. Unplanned always adds to the enjoyment. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

GOOD for Brenda. Every married woman deserves fun outside of their marriage. Please....keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Close call

Great story....hope you have more to follow! Love to hear more of the budding infidelity that Brenda is entering. Good for her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

That should be the spur to for her to sort her life out, hopefully there's another chapter to read how.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 7 years ago
Loved the last two lines

The last two lines alone made the entire story worth reading, at least for me.

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitalmost 7 years ago
Not bad

Why bother sending him out the back? She drank all night, suspects he's been cheating, and sounds like she doesn't care - up to hearing the car. I'd say she wanted the confrontation and wanted to give hubby shit over neglecting her.

johntcookseyjohntcookseyalmost 7 years ago
Nice opening

Although I know this can stand alone, I'd love to hear more about Brenda. Nice, clean writing - good sympathetic characters. ***** Thanks.

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