All Comments on 'Brian: Cock thirsty Rosaline'

Was he valedictorian?

In 1st POV it is silly jumping to other people and loses the storyline. Besides why would Rose call herself Aunt Rose in her own thoughts.

Just noticed by accident that you had made this a series. Why not use chapter 1, 2 etc like everyone else does? I really enjoyed the 1st part, but it lost impetus as it continued.

Having sex in the loungeroom with mum in the house is plain silly.

make this a short story series, the way you wrote it was perfect

6 cm nipples huh? Damn, that would be a sight to see!