All Comments on 'Brian's Loss Pt. 01'

Great story as usual. 5 stars, as usual, lol. Thanks BigMadStork!

Deep six MaryAnn and go with the sisters..........all family all the time!

26-22-24? Are you nuts?

I hope MaryAnn was just practicing for next time. I love a rider who can go a long while. I zone out when the pussy is good. I love a multi cummer best...cum enough for both of us....good pussy don't need a quicker nut.

Great writing!!!

Ya get rid of MaryAnn let him find out she is a leach let the mom and sisters help

hope you lose the co worker and get mom and sisters going!!

Where's the taboo?

Interesting start. Mary Ann is a predictable character. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Mary Ann was just after man meat, long term Kids not important to her. To step sisters kids are as important as he is. Ditch the Project Manager

MaryAnn is wrong for him and his little ones. Go With the sisters and mom.

Glad you’re back.

I like the story so far, wondering what you have in mind for MaryAnn. Will she make it to the end or not...

Another fun, well-written story from BigMadStork! so far it's a great read. It's even well edited!

The premise is good, but the main character is kind of dum... She interviews a candidate to babysit his babies thinking she is too good to be true, and when he finds out that she was not the good candidate she said was, he does not reject her! He can't see she is an arrivist, although it is clear she is one... And besides, she is completely flat chested! As a tit man, it turns me off completely... She isn't sexy at all!

Patricia, Patty, and Pat ARE ALL THE SAME FUCKING NAME. Can't you try to have at least a smidgen of creativity?

100% HOT thanks for the store and the NUT

Absolutely horrid style. All declarative sentences. Nothing but “I did this, she did rhat”

Great start to a wonderful story. 5/5

Nice story. Love it. AAAAA+++++

Fantastic start...

Don't like your 'Point of View' style of writing. Annoying and boring.

Why are all the men you write infantile, suicidal, and indecisive?

Just an average story Mary Ann is just a gold digger his mother or sisters will figure it out I hope gave it 3