All Comments on 'Bridge Ch. 01'

I love your magic. Or at least the magic your main character can use. Not just the implementation, but the process as well, very nice.

Starting with "Ch" in the title heavily implies there's more, and I've very interested in where this story will go.

Thanks for the feedback, jpz007ahren! I wanted the magic to be relatively simple and adaptable, but with the potential for complexity depending on the circumstances. I certainly have a lot more in mind for this story.

Well done and can't wait for chapter 2.

Chapter 2 now, please!

It was a great read. You are definitely a talented writer. Expecting more to come from you.

But for an opening chapter it lacked a reason for being.