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by Veovin

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

The story of Marcus Veovin keeps getting better and better, as evidence by this latest chapter. This is a great romance story in every respect. Five Stars.

Rapier875Rapier87526 days ago

I'm currently on page 9 and I'm loving the story and the characters.

But........please don't keep using her name in every paragraph, or sometimes more.

And as for his shapely/stunning/beautiful BRUNETTE...

If there's only two characters in play at the time, she or her is sufficient, all the repetitive Bridget's and brunettes is killing me, we know her name and know she's a brunette, there's no need to keep reminding us every other line !

That said, it's still a great story............and so back to page 9.

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My name is Michael Verley and I'm the author of an epic adult fantasy series known as "the Legacy Project." Writing has always been my dream, and I strive to create prose that will not only stimulate the mind, but other parts of the body as well! The stories I'm posting on Lit...