All Comments on 'Bridget's Days Ch. 01'

Sorry...you lost me, it seemed like you edited too much out and the store got lost somehow although I do know the point you're trying to make

Patricia's back. Looking forward to another entertaining ride! For the previous commenter, you probably need to read Patricia's earlier series, Bridget's Nights, or at least the final chapter, to understand what is happening here.

Dear Patricia,

It broke my heart to read this story. So touched with the joy of living. In the end, there are just two stories: I wasted my life or I lived my life to the fullest I could. Yours are always stories of the later. Thank you.

Bridget's back!

And one of my favourite authours on Lit.

Liked this one, I can tell it's going to be interesting.

thanks Patricia

Along for another great ride.

Thanks

George

It's an interesting format, Patty, but do we really believe in Vampires?

Nice love scene. Really nice.

Bridget and the Patricia51 I like best.

Best wishes

Robert

I didn't think writers used that lousy app .

"I wanted to appraise Robert of what had happened." You do mean "apprise", I hope. No one is "appraising" anything.

"the last of the Stuart's". Why the posessive? Plurals don't carry apostrophes.

"I didn't stop and call anyone". Do you mean "I didn't stop TO call anyone"?

Story OK, English (even American English), sloppy.

Kind of disappointed that Bridgit is no longer a vampire and we are regulated to reliving an old ladies memories. Maybe I'll be surprised, but it's kind of a spoiler when you know how she ends up.