All Comments on 'Brightmoore Ch. 01'

First, she wouldn't be called a deacon, but a deaconess. Second, drawing the pictures of three womens faces does not make it an illustrated story. Nice try, no cigar.

Where are the illustrations ? - pretty good story , but wrong section

Thanks for the femdom warning tag.

Hardly qualifies for illustrated

Doc

not an illustration......... duh.............. and femdom is pathetic......

Well done. Ignore the shitbag critic with the cigar comment.

Nice to see an imaginative piece of sexy writing.

Thanks, rufuscat! I appreciate the support!

For anyone curious about that comment, however: only women can be part of church leadership in Brightmoore! Deacon/Deaconess is redundant, since there are never any male Deacons!

Doesn't qualify for illustrated!!!!

Yes Virginia, his and our pleasure awaits

I agree , does not qualify for illustrated. More pics needed , for example like the story before:

https://www.literotica.com/s/ministers-lust-for-parishioner

My apologies, BigGreg8x! I'm new here, and didn't fully understand the category conventions.

I've already petitioned the admins to have this story moved to a new section.

Sorry again, everyone!!!

I love it when the clergy corrupt their flock. Please continue to write about religion. You have a great style and imagination.