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You tell a good story Imaginative and sexually stimulating just what eroticism is about. You have shown yourself to be really quite versatile moving across genres. Keep them coming. Totziens, goodbye
GREAT STORY BRINGING BACK MY LAPTOP.
COULD HAVE BEEN A BIT LONGER BUT NONE THE LESS.
WELL WRITTEN AND EXCITING EROTIC STORY
Funny and sexy, great story. I would imagine that similar things happen all the time with computer repair people (or, at least the finding the porn part)