All Comments on 'Bringing the Whore Home'

....12 gauge and discharge it into his crotch.

for women, forget anything resembling the BDSM scene.

The more I dip into 'erotica' on this site, the less I like it. This story is typical. No personalities in any characters other than stock 'dominant male' and 'submissive female.' No names are needed, since they're just cardboard cut outs. Over and over, humiliation and degradation masquerade as consensual erotica. In this story, as in the others, we never get a glimpse of why in the world the male is so enticing any woman would want to allow herself to be emotionally abused (and physically hurt) to be with him.

Ugh. Just...ugh. There's a difference between having a slave and keeping them safe as that position demands, and beating your wife around while ignoring her feelings towards the situation. Your mix of both is just not appealing.

i just love your writeing it keep me on edage the whole time i was reading i so wanted it to end with the new Mistress not upset and crying but please and happy but just the same i loved the story

A very nice story with an unusual twist. Well written and exciring. I hope it will be continued.

I cried in pity for their embarassment but in envy for the strenght of this master.

That was very touching that the whore ended up comforting her new mistress. Keep up writing. I'll keep an eye out for more of your work.

I love it. It was stimulating. Keep writing!