by m_storyman_x
This was great. I like the transition Nancy is going through. The gradualness makes it very believable. I certainly hope there will be at least one more part if now 2. One where Mike and Nancy do it with Mary and Dean and then another where the whole group gets together. I can't make up my mind if I want Nancy to find out about what Mike was doing or not. Maybe she should and then she can tell him about what she did in Iraq!! Turn about is fairplay...
Jerry
Very thrilling story. Please set about writing the one in which you take your wife to one of the parties. I am particularly interested in what you observe her doing with other men.
"I had a hunch that we were going to be going to the next party." Does Mary/Mike need to encourage sex between Nancy and Dean before Nancy attends a full up group party. Will Nancy be hesitating because she does not really know Mike's reaction or her own reaction?
I have been expecting them to go to the next party and getting Nancy's reactions, as the revelation dawns that he has been intimate with more than just Mary. Does the mirage get roughed up or even more strong and exciting?
Is this the end or a new beginning?
what (or who) Nancy was doing when she was in Iraq? After she returned home, she was a sex-crazed fucking machine. Tell us her story.
That was a really interesting and a hot sexual story. Just like many of your other stories, it kept my interest up till the end. People go out to resturaunts to eat, but it doesn't mean you don't ultimately enjoy your wife or significant other's cooking. Sex & open marriages/relationships should be able to be viewed the same way. Stiring up the sexual juices of partners by enjoying new things together, can also be invirorating & beneficial to a stronger relationship. Take away the enjoyment of sex, & an open mind, the passion that sustains a body & emotional status will die a meseriable life.. Drawbacks can be unexpected risks such as pregnancies or STD/s, to be dealt with if you are not prudent in those choices..
You really do need to continue this Hot Erotic Story. You have done a wonderful job with your characters. Yes, Mike and Nancy need to talk about their relationship and experiences and where they want to proceed. Thank You!
perfect ending.
No reason for any more, it may destroy what is already here.
to write about sensual couplings while others use words to describe sex.
I am most happy to say you are one of the former.
As for this story, I think this is a perfect ending, better to leave us wanting more than to give us more than we wanted.
I know you abandoned this long ago but I wish you would pick it up again! Really liked it
I see you are still writing but it does not look as though there are anymore to this series. Really enjoyed this series, would seriously love to see where they all ended up, particularly if the wife was introduced into the games completely.
So hot, well written and very sexy. As far as I am concerned this story could go on forever. Thanks.