by R410a
What a wonderful love story! Great characters, excellent introduction, a carefully constructed build-up, and tender love scenes written with great skill. This is Romance story telling at its best; excellent work by a fine author. Five stars.
Solid story. But I have to admit as I was nearing the end, I would find another incomplete story. Boy did I get fooled.
5 stars and thank you for another great story.
Another homerun for sure. I thought in the beginning he would end up with Kalamazoo despite the name of the story, I love the way you tied everything up so nicely.
I was scrolling down the list of new stories, saw your name and didn't hesitate, never been disappointed in the past, wasn't today. Thanks.
A nice one. Very sweet. I was afraid she would scare him off eventually, but she didn’t.
Good story, thought it was going to take a dark path when the girlfriend started showing possessive tendencies, but it didn't.
You have great details! I love the hair on Bruce's manly chest that tickles Brittany's breast and nipples. Bruce is one sexy man who deposits his sexy man cream deep in her womb. Great story, as always!
P.S. I'd love to see you update Tilly, and give that young man a hairy chest in the added details!
A pretty good story. I thought that some of the sex scenes seemed to be more clinical than they were erotic or romantic. That said, it was a very enjoyable story.
Great job, thanks for sharing. I can't understand why lovers have to become sluts and whores; all the other degrading names authors use.
Great story teller with wholesome feel good endings. Like the fact all the women in your stories have hairy pussies...real life.not some bald 10 year old. Being a retired Dr. I can tell you most all women have hair, especially from about 30 to 35 years and on. Maybe a trim during swimsuit season , but that is it.
Anyway keep up the good stories
What can I say, except another great story. I'm getting to run out of your stories, and I don't want to go to any others so get some more written. You've ruined me for anyone else. 15 stars
I truly enjoyed reading your story from the beginning to the end, a tremendous, romantic love story! I wish my first wife would have been so eager to have sex with me as Brittany was with Bruce......sigh. I gave it 5 stars, would have given it more if I could've.
A bit too "sex-heavy" for my taste: I miss the depiction of the emotional side, the feelings, especially of Bruce. So it reads *to me* (!) a bit like Brittany is nothing more than a sex toy for him that he merely uses.
It's not clear from the story that he ultimately marries her and why - what a shame! IMVHO there would have been (much) more in it !
3/5 stars !
So glad to see that the women (and men) in your stories are happy with the hairy bodies -- hairy pussies, cocks, chest and abs -- and not so anxious to shave clean. Your men have very sexy hairy chests, and the hair tickles the women's nipples and entertains them in the area of touch -- and the women's hairy mounds provide great taste for their men! The sight of the sexy body har is truly a sexy and entertaining appearance. Love what you write Keep it up!
It was a nice story. Some creative stuff in there. It seemed like the sex overwhelmed the romance of the relationship. Maybe less of the "Fuck me because I'm your cheap slut whore." vernacular and a bit more of making love? The story plot had relatively small obstacles on the way to the story resolution. Greater hurdles creating more angst on the reader's part for the successful relationship would have been beneficial. It still earned 5 stars because it was pleasant reading.