All Comments on 'Brock's First Cock'

Dude, seriously?

Stopping the story like that it's neither original, or fun, or cliff-hanging, just annoying.

The story was good tough.

I wonder if Cameron will record Brock without him noticing.

Now keep it going! :)

Great story, but too short. I hope you finish this story. I love being a Cocksucker for a straight man with a big cock.

Nice story, bad ending. I hope Cameron will also suck Brock than fuck him with that big cock.

I agree with others! This is a HOT story, but the ending was a downer . . . . One can leave a hook for the next chapter without leaving the reader hanging! Good descriptive writing with a few editorial issues. Keep writing! Practice (as with cock-sucking) makes perfect!

Obviously from some of the comments posted, your writing has pulled in several readers who objected to the too-soon ending of this part..

SO: Follow your characters 'own words: DON'T STOP !

Anxiously awaiting chapter two and maybe three ??

DV19

Cameron seems to be a very decent guy, plus he has a big dick & knows how to offer it to shy guys.

I needed a Cameron when i was Brock's age.

Hot story. I want more. My cock is as hard as Cam's...

Very hot. Ready for more

fucking hot I remember my first time 4 years ago it was weird but after the first time I went back for more as I sucked the fuck out of his cock

Give Cameron some chest hair to match his treasure trail! A sexy young man!

perfect start, just don't keep us hanging on too long, please

Don't Stop...

Mmmmmmmm

I like short stories that get to the point. Let the reader’s imagination fill in the blanks with their imaginations.

You so need to finish this story.

Don't leave us hanging please it was just getting good when you stopped.

If I see you've posted another story, will definitely pass.

Yum! Delicious story. Wish I was Brock.