by SciFurz
To the story, there are no loose threads so whether you make a sequel or not it's all good.
I think it will be cool if the planet was the same planet that the story abandoned with the enemy took place on
Fantastic story. Please don't stop now. They survived but how do the five proceed.
Thank. You
So much can be done with this...including peace between their races! Hope you will!!!!!
Such a good way to end it. To be honest I was kinda hoping that they would end up in the same planet as the other deserters from Abandoned with the enemy. That would have been fun to see lol
You have captured my attention with the first story set in this Universe and kept it with them all, am truley glad you have not let this beautiful universe die out. Please, if you are up to it and still have feelings for any of the races and worlds you have brought to us, please continue.
I really hope to one day be able to visit this family again, such a beautiful story of accptance and love, despite their races differences. Much love and hopefully their story doesn't end here.