All Comments on 'Broken Boundaries Ch. 09 - Epilogue'

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TheSecretBunnyTheSecretBunnyabout 4 years ago
Great conclusion

To the story, there are no loose threads so whether you make a sequel or not it's all good.

ZydrasthorneZydrasthorneabout 4 years ago
The story

I think it will be cool if the planet was the same planet that the story abandoned with the enemy took place on

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please continue there story

Fantastic story. Please don't stop now. They survived but how do the five proceed.

Thank. You

arrowglassarrowglassabout 4 years ago
DITTO...a sttory that needs continuing!

So much can be done with this...including peace between their races! Hope you will!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Amazing

Such a good way to end it. To be honest I was kinda hoping that they would end up in the same planet as the other deserters from Abandoned with the enemy. That would have been fun to see lol

UncertainTUncertainTabout 2 years ago

Great Story, I really enjoyed it.

ShadowVamp89ShadowVamp89about 1 year ago
Beautiful as always

You have captured my attention with the first story set in this Universe and kept it with them all, am truley glad you have not let this beautiful universe die out. Please, if you are up to it and still have feelings for any of the races and worlds you have brought to us, please continue.

1Sam20231Sam202310 months ago

Very interesting ending. A very good intro to a second volume.. hopefully

ShadowVamp89ShadowVamp893 months ago
Beautiful story.

I really hope to one day be able to visit this family again, such a beautiful story of accptance and love, despite their races differences. Much love and hopefully their story doesn't end here.

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