All Comments on 'Broken Ch. 05: Jackie's Story'

That was a cracking bit of mind fuckery in the maze. Just love her fight too.

How's our little escapee doing?

Poor Jackie has endured enough punishment during her escape. I love her fighting spirit but a different approach from David wouldn’t go amiss this time.

BTW where is Linda?

Building trust by courting skin cancer, third degree burns and heat stroke? What an asshole.

How is Jackie getting on? Looking forward to what happens next. Does anybody ever been kind to her?

We are waiting to know more from Jackie and Linda. Please updated soon!

Dear DarkFantasy56,

These are two very good stories and I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.

Do you want to carry on writing Broken? Could you please let us know one way or the other?

Thank you