All Comments on 'Broken Home Pt. 03'

On goodness gracious I can't wait for the next chapter. So good & sexy!

Good chapter!

5

Great build up for the story! There are so many different ways that this can go and I can’t wait to see them.

I can see both getting pregnant

So glad I found this and it's actively being worked on. Love what you're doing here, can't wait for more!

more tears, more applause!! wonderful story line cant wait to see whats next ! PLEASE keep the chapters coming, too good a story to stop here

Very good story! I would love to get more detailed descriptions of their bodies, looks etc. and especially of their butts. Kind of hard to imagine them while reading sometimes.

Part four and five are coming very, very soon. Four is pending and five will be uploaded shortly. Thanks for reading!

Gotta keep your women satisfied and care for them. Looking forward to how this relationship develops.

You are producing remarkable work! I was waiting to see how the revelation would unfold, the cellphone message, etc. I was not disappointed! It is my pleasure to read stories this well-written! Please keep them coming!!!!!

Great chapter to a very well told story. I am going to hate seeing this one end. I bet there are other couples you have to tell me about! Lucky me!

Thanks for sharing Your fantasies and talent.

Cheers

SAGE

IS, you are one of the best writers I have come across in Lit. I'm planning to read each of your stories. I'd love to read more from you. Please continue the good work.