All Comments on 'Broken in Bondage'

Very creative scene and positioning. What you should discuss in "Chap. # 2" is what happens to her after she is trained.

Great predicament bondage!

Best story I've read in a long time. Explicitly erotic

how is this not non con

ever read. On or off Lit.

What is this crap? Silly me, the tag said BDSM.

So I was expecting something sexy, not kidnapping, torture and foreign object rape. Can’t decide if you were trying to make him sound like a dirty old man or just a patronising misogynist.

Obviously the story could be salvaged with just one sentence, like...

“Aren’t you a lucky girl, your Master arranged this training for you”

From that point it ...could ...possibly ... be a sexy story (provided safe words are adhered to), well aside from the point that the male protagonist appears to be a twisted sociopath. Whether or not she stayed with her Dom afterwards is another matter entirely, I know how I’d bet my money.

FYI - BDSM there’s a direct implication of CONSENT, (S.S.C) Something that is sadly missing from your story. I know it’s a longwinded way of saying this should be a Non Consent story but it pisses me off when people misrepresent bdsm so badly.

Very well told vignette, but I have to agree with other commenters. This belongs in the Non-Con category, _not_ in BDSM.

i seriously dont understand why people are getting upset that it is under BDSM it is meant to be here because bdsm stands for bondage dominant submissive masochist this is a perfect story and i love this pridacament bondage the way she is forced to fuck herself on a vibrating dildo is amzingly smart i coldnt have imagined it better

Oh god, I loved it, I was so close to coming, but I need a chapter 2 please.