All Comments on 'Broken Pt. 01'

of something very good.

That was a good beginning but very cruel to us fans of your work being so short. I am so waiting to see where you take this storyline.

way too short

Great start, but unfortunately, way too short, I can't wait for the next part.

Ok, good start. I hope the next part comes out soon.

Was an enjoyable introduction to another of your stories but would of preferred a longer first chapter to really get a feel for it. Though it does show your typical promise.

Great start another series can't wait for more

kind of a dry start but still love your work cant wait for the next chapter

I need more! I'm begging you

great start to what should be a great series

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Not enough of a story to put out. You can do bette!

Daamn man, you are the author who immediately captures my attention into your story. Though o would be thrilled to read the second part of this , I would prefer the completion of the pornstar series and the one that you had just started before this series.

Hats off man !!!!

It's a good start. But really short

all these exceptional stories being posted I am hooked on another one of yours

A little short, but interesting start. Hope the next part comes soon!

Bro, I love your stories. However, you're starting all these series and not updating them regularly. This won't do.

Please give us faster updates.

Complete one series and then start another.

I love your works so far!

Soul 71. You are one of the very few writers that puts a bit of fire in the belly of their characters and I just hope you get to finish some of the great stories that you have started recently.

Damn good start..

Is Emily his Aunt or Sister?

You have so many stories that I am dying for you to add extra parts too..

I hope you will add some chapters.

Maybe this should have rolled into the next chapter.

please finish this story

This is my second time reading this and you should definitely be getting paid for this kinda story. By all means keep the chapters coming don't leave us dangling.

Five stars and not an ounce of pity or sympathy for Pauline, Great start! It's like gonna go the usual way but that just makes it better, Can't wait for Jacob to get some "family time"

Let me guess...Mother and daughter will eventually move in with the son, then gradually they will seduce him, and finally he will punish them in some way and yet end up fucking them.

That was good until the end where you wrote, To be continued.

Leave it at that, it was really good. Don't destroy a good story. Have the old woman and her bastard daughter leave town.

I know you won't because the boy was actually her father's child. Emily is his full sister. Then they all end up singing songs around the campfire fucking up a storm. Sounds like a laim ending.

Short and to the point! A great opening! Thank you!

damn i really like your new submissions!

..bash a perfectly fine story like this? Why, just because you don't like the idea of anything other than Burn The Bitch? Everyone has their own style. There are things about Soul's work that I like and some things that I don't, but I don't feel the need to bash over content. Critique people's technique constructively, sure, but don't bash people because you dislike their content. Just read something else instead.

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A strong start. Let’s see where it goes.

Interesting twist for this genre - looking forward to reading the series more...

Nothing there but a useless waste of skin

Nice, an interesting story. AAAA+++

Could have sworn I started reading the series but apparently not. This one reads really well, so looking forward to more chapters! 5*

was roy her blood father? so emily was/is an incest by blood kid? man thats gotta leave a huge mental mark on a person