All Comments on 'Broken Up'

Beautifully horny and pre-cum inducing x

Lovely. Other writers should take notes from you on how to do subtle character descriptions.

That was really hot. Please write more

Delightful read!

Super hot. I hope this is t the only chapter and these two continue exploring how lovable and attractive Kal is to Em - and vice versa!

This is a great story, and definitely deserving of another chapter or three

I loved it! So hot :)

I hope we get more chapters, a wonderful and hot story!

Need more I love it

This is so sweet! And hot as hell! What a great read.

Some guys take break ups very hard and swear off women. Most find a satisfying new relationship

Sweet story

Lovely descriptions, raw arousals, well paced culmination.

Would love to read more of them.

This begs a second chapter. It sounds like it'd be a great, and fun, read. I hope you keep it going.

Lovely read.

Really great.

Pleasssssssse keep this one going! So many options! 😎

I like it, it was nice, 😊. After reading I thought I would have liked it to be a bit longer maybe teased the buildup, him visiting an over a week or so, slowly getting Kal back to his former self.