All Comments on 'Brooke'

Absolutely perfect.

So will join in with you two next somebody else from work or somebody you know of the more women she is with the more she will love it think about it ok

A wonderful short story, two ladies with a need to be together to share there companionship and love.

It was beautiful. . slowly and enjoyment. .. . . I am very willing to try this.

Truly sexy. Not to be greedy here, but i hope there's another chapter.

Very well done! I must say that I wish it finished better, so much into the hunt, then meeting, then the ending brushed over their further love making... I can imagine where all of the this led them together, did they fall in love, you hinted at it in one comment, yet didn't pursue it... Falling in love would have made this so much better than it already was!

Thank you for your writings!

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Fsntastic story. Hot hot hot. So true about the married part.

I find the sexiest stories are those that have some narrative that provides context and interest. This story does this as it opens not with sex, as so many Literotica stories do, but with a little narrative about the shared workplace.

I highly recommend this story.

*T= Too F= Fuckin' H= Hot First time I read one of your works! Going to read chapter 2 next. Oh, how I wish you lived near me! I would so much like to try to convince you to give another guy a go! Thanks. 5 stars!

Short but sweet. You delivered a loving courtship story. The only way you could better it would be too expand their courtship, and draw us into the drama that Brooke will inevitably have to face. I'm giving you 5☆'s.

So yummy. So so yummy!

A very nice read

A smart, well-written story with empathy, generosity and hotness all swirled together. After plwing through so much gruel on this site, thank you very much!