All Comments on 'Brooke Works at the Hardware Store'

Always good to read your clever words and screwing in your newly built studio, with all that tongue in groove, is a good way to find squeaky joints

Wonderful, almost poetic.

Nicely done :)

Cute story but if i were him her ending words would ruin it for me! She would have gone from a nice girl that i thought liked me to a slut who has me as one of many.

Such a fantasy!

Very cute story, almost sad that it ended so quickly. 😃

I liked this. It builds erotic tension, even without explicit sex scenes. It delivers a satisfactory ending within the constraints of a limited word count. It feels like a complete story, which is tough to accomplish in flash fiction.

Very well done.

Nice one . Short and Sweet.

She definitely delivered the goods with excellent customer service and hopefully satisfaction as well. Too bad 99.99% of delivery drivers are guys. That means this entire lovely story is pure fantasy, and that’s alright! Ps, the thing for the garden hose is called a hose bib. Weird name.

Hose bib? No, just a coil of hose on the ground. The retractable doo-hickey is on the hose out the front.

Signature-style, Eebs. I admire your relaxed writing. 750 words without feeling rushed? Nice work. Very happy to read something new from you. It's been awhile.

Nice story! I like a good tease, both the young lady and your story that leaves things to my imagination.

Now why is this entrancing? 5 stars.

Smiling at that tease – so naturally, 5*s for this. Makes my evening better.