All Comments on 'Brother, sister and friend Ch. 01'

Well that progressed quickly.

I gave you a 4 because you included pussy hair in the beginning. Had you described the bush before the shave or better, left her mound in place, it would have been a firm rating of five. Hairy pussies are always rated higher by your peers. Check it out (read some hairy tag stories) and see what I mean. The shaved look of the late 80's that were intended to do nothing more than model swimsuits, also left in the late 80's. Don't believe me? Go to Myrtle beach between November - February and take look at lady fur, - thick hairs spilling out the sides and the tops of bikinis at the indoor pools. Shaved pussies (stubble, infected hair pimples with pus oozing and sickening razor burned peeling skin) are history and they have been for a long time! Stop writing about them if you want ratings above 3 from your peers. The nipple descriptions were great! Keep at it.

Future cuckold in training. Story didn't even fill out a single full page, but then again it didn't need to. Once I got to the part where Laura started bossing Matt around and telling him what to do. I stopped reading there and immediately skipped over the rest going straight to this comment. I was really expecting something better from someone prolific enough to have 162 other submissions published. But then again, maybe they're all just half-pager stuff like this one. 🤔 It's extremely easy to pump out a huge volume of work when the story's extra short and poor quality to boot. 1/5

That was ridiculous and you clearly never actually get laid do you.

Nice fantasy....

Not very believable though...

Good start, will look out for chapter 2

Now this was an intriguing, exciting and very entertaining story. Passionate yet compassionate; writtten with great talent and keen observation. Congratulations; very well done!

ftds