All Comments on 'Brothers and Sisters Ch. 10 - End'

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 2 years ago

I’m sad to see it end.

RayRam53RayRam53over 2 years ago

It was a very well done. thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I appreciate your work,

Thanks for sharing.

bshell47bshell47over 2 years ago

What a delightful series.

A little difficult to keep track of all the coupling, but worth it.

How about a second generation story going out 10 years?

Excellent writing.

They should start their own city!

jlc123jlc123over 2 years ago

You do great work and ended the story well. It is hard to end a story like this on a good note but you did a very good job.

lovedefactolovedefactoalmost 2 years ago

Generally speaking, I don't like so-called group stories, but you accomplished the task superbly.

rupertonyrupertony3 months ago

Read it in two sittings,I enjoyed the storyline;implausible but possible,though unlikely.Compliments for the entire 'story'.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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