by Nakedcraving
Good concept but don't make the story a synopsis of what's happened, dive into it in real time and take us into the mind of the female who's fucking two brothers. Create some drama. This has a lot of potential if you can take it real time and give the story some serious beef
I enjoy the concept to the story. Believe it or not, living the poly life is difficult in the beginning but with time, patience and open and honest communication, out becomes a dream come true. I also agree moving the story into a first person perspective will bring readers into the story better. Please don't give up on this story line theme, even if it isn't incest driven.
Wow it sounds just like Erika and I except that I shared her with my navy friend and not my brother and the first time was on new year's night two and a half months after our wedding after that night he moved in with us and lived with us for little over three years