All Comments on 'Brown Eyes, Blue Eyes'

Great story. Looking forward to a continuation.

Great scene! Looking forward to part 2!

We have probably read their writing before. The writing is exquisite.

Lots more please, very good start!

It’s so good, please post more

Absolutely exceptional for what it is. You set the scene so well and the characters are incredibly vivid and realistic. It comes across as a clear cut horror story, the back story paints a very vivid picture of the extreme level of trouble that she’s in. I liked that you didn’t try and pass it off as a sexy encounter because it isn’t.

As for eroticism, for me it quantifies as erotic horror and not erotic in the traditional sense. Whether she survives this encounter physically or emotionally is (a) out of her hands and (b) if she is released she has a long road to recovery from her being raped and terrorised. I didn’t miss the irony of Mr Brown Eyes calling her a slut, it’s absolute bullshit but still a very predictable comment.

Thanks for writing.

Tess (uk)