All Comments on 'Brown Eyes, Blue Smile Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

i rly liked the story hope you keep going and update soon

trinityx3trinityx3over 13 years ago
WOW!

I really like the story. It is sad, romantic and crazy.

I can't wait for the next chapter

wayseriwayseriover 13 years ago
next chapter. please oh please

hi, wonder when will you submit the next chapter... please, please do it soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Umm

1st his name was Eric then Nigel then micheal please make up your mind before you write stories it throws us dyslexic people off

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Confused

I'm liking the story so far even with the grammar errors; I don't think I ever known a 3 year old having homework or a preschooler being a caregiver of a terminally ill person.

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