All Comments on 'Brown Sugar'

AIDS

1 star

Well written. But sucking cum out of an asshole is to much for me. I find it just plain vulgar, and did nothing but ruin a good story for me.

What a bummer. Took a 4-5* story and turned it into a 1/2*....and only that for the first 2 pages. When he overhead the deceit and lies they perpetrated on him.....well here's 45 wasted minutes of my life I will never get back. And to name it Brown Sugar.....so fucked up.

I had this story pegged as a 5 until "Greg" came up and the whole thing was ruined. It was way to complicated to follow everyone's thinking and what they thought others were thinking. And that none of the subject sex was interesting me at all. So I skipped the rest of the story except for the final couple of paragraphs where it was confirmed that the whole thing had blown up appropriately and Dee was trying to win back the protagonist. So to sum up the story as a whole, I gave it a 2.