All Comments on 'Bryan & Carla after the Supermarket Ch. 03'

I laughed to my hearts content on their army slang and the agreed rules for their joint future had me in stitches! Not that her parents are much different, but glad to see them accepting him as their future son in law. The evening at the pub went smoother than expected, no needless drama of any kind to ruin the day. The walk home was sweet and gave them ample room to get things worked out and prepare for the big day tomorrow, just remember to take your coat for the walk to the car :)

5* with high expectations for the BBQ and the proposal!

So much waffle, whole paragraphs that just add nothing. Nice story but just right side of boring.

Without sounding condescending FUCKEN TASTIC STORY MAN! We sad sacks love to see the knight in shining armor get the Princess and this story delivers! Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us! See ya.

For Young Adults.. Carla calls Bryan "Darling"? Constantly, as does her mum call Barry "Darling" haven't her that since I last watch a show from the 1950's.

Wish I grew up as a teenager in England, where it seems on every first "date" guys can expect Blow jobs, hand job's or possibly intercourse.

Great story - very erotic! Loved the military maneuvers and jargon! One if the best!

Can't finish. To much ring around the rosy. Story could have been told in one chapter.