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by Quietoldie

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ssubramaniam122ssubramaniam122almost 9 years ago
This is brilliant.

I love your writing. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Haha - STILL laughing!

Maybe you should have posted this in Satire and Humor? Pretty bad.

mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 9 years ago
Very nice work.

Thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to chapter 2. Five stars, and don't listen to nonnies!

FlewidityFlewidityalmost 9 years ago

Please do write more of this story. Huge turn on for me. Patiently waiting for more. ;)

talis13talis13almost 9 years ago
Anonymous troll

The story is very good.

The troll who calls itself Anonymous is an embarrassment to trolls everywhere.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Okay writing. The cheating thing is not erotic to me. Both characters come across obnoxious and small minded for it. Do Rick a favor and just cut him out before you let her run wild.

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago
enjoying this

I am so loving this. Please keep writing. Oh gawd I need this.

sober71sober71over 8 years ago
Super beginning

Just loving the tuition, off to read Pt. 2

Ignore the annons they have no balls

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I am retired and over 65. I would like to make money from writing but a short novel I put out on Kindle has not given me any income. Seeing my words in print in Literotica has been great. My writing has slowed down over the years. The stories I write for Lit are not from perso...

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