All Comments on 'BTB: Anne'

Duna left alot of strange comments but to have him banned was ridiculous.

Of course this entire site is becoming ridiculous thanks to dipshits like frontlinecaster and his good friend Laurel.

Waste of time!

i agree with front line caster

and now she can wind up and rotate. TK U MLJ LV NV

Why do you sissies complain when a total slut wife piece of shit, gets shit on. She earned it. Wear it. This was not a one time mistake, but a full fledged affair. She was ready to run off with the other piece of shit. Men who feel they have the right to try to seduce my wife, will feel my wrath. I wouldn't consider apologizing to ANYONE for my behavior. I assure you, I am no redneck hoosier. My father was an attorney and I am a degreed professional. One with balls.

When the cheating spouse is caught and gets nothing in the end, I consider it an excellent tale. Sometimes I do wonder about the people siding with the cheating spouse. The last commenter had a name for them. I think I'll just call them fucked in the head.

Just my opinion

...but a great feel good story!

In my case, I handed it differently. I came home and caught my wife and her lover red handed, er.. red cocked. He was be pounding her and neither noticed me standing at the partially closed door. Home three days early, she had no idea anyone was around. So I pulled out my cell phone and started taking some great photos where everything was visible and there was no doubt who it was. Then I went downstairs and downloaded them on the computer, printed off 50 of each photo and left, but not before I left a copy of each photo for them both on the dining room table, laid out nice and neat.

Then I went to the store and bought 50 manila envelopes and used contacts from my phone and mailed all 50. To both their boss's, our church (he went there too), both our parents, siblings and every friend I could think of. Then I waited. She'd called my phone a few times while I prepared everything but I didn't answer. Instead, I waited until everything was done, then answered.

Her voice was frightened sounding and she asked where I was and I told her I was finally between meetings and that was why I hadn't answered yet. I told her how much I loved her (gag me) and missed her (gag me again) and couldn't wait to get home for some of her lovin'. She sounded distraught but when I asked her she just said she wasn't feeling well. yeah, I bet with all that cum running out. I told her I'd see her in three days and we said our goodbyes. Then I did all the stuff you do when preparing for divorce and on the 3rd day, went home. By then, everyone was calling her about the pictures, while she was trying to act nonchalant about all the calls.

Of course, she wasn't in the mood that night, nor did I plan on ever touching her diseased cunt. The next morning, Saturday, we were sitting at the table with me doing my best to be friendly and she went to answer the knock on the door. I knew who it was and when they said "Ma'am, you've been served," she passed out and hit the floor! I called 911 and the were there in less than 5 minutes, taking her to the hospital

And that was it. I told her parents to pick her up and take her to their home, she no longer was part of mine. It came out I'd sent the pictures to everyone and somehow, *I* ended up being the bad guy! But that's cool, she fucked someone other than me so I fucked her back. Win win.

" But the real topper was a second DVD also showing her boyfriend in action with seven other women he was fucking while doing her"- Bull shit! Gave it a one.

A nice fantasy maybe but the reality? No attorney is going to suggest he cooks the books. His divorce isn't worth the attorneys license to practice. It wouldn't make any difference anyway. He could cook the books, but he could NOT cook the years of IRS

filings made by both his Company and his personal returns. So the Court froze all their assets. A forensic accountant would have been brought in and the correct value of his business and it's profitability during the years they were married would have been established by the Courts. All past records of their investments would have been subpoenaed from the Companies and their values established. The consignment company would have been ordered to restore all their furnishings or replace them with things of equal value, the credit cards would have been restored and the Court would have ordered him to renew the car lease and maintain the car until the conclusion of the divorce or face contempt of Court charges. Part of her lawsuit against him would have included slander, loss of employment and libel. All of which were easy to prove as they had the PI testify to his actions (again the PI isn't going to risk his career and license to save hubby and there is no client priviledge with a PI. So while Anne cheated and he embarrassed her she got half of everything including half of his company. In a separate Civil lawsuit Anne won an additional 5 million dollars for his actions that cost her her job and good name and from Dana when her name was added to the lawsuit. The Judge and jury were upset when is was revealed he was sleeping with his divorce attorney. That little tidbit came out in the aftermath of the divorce, during the Civil trial. Dana was disbarred for her activities. No judge or jury would do less. He's still under investigation for the assault on Lamar. You see it wasn't ruled an accident. Lamar saw his attackers and he had the bruise left by the baseball bat on his chest as evidence. The club also had a security system that recorded the bad guys entering and leaving the building. So hubby may yet go to prison for 15 years. All in all a poorly though out fantasy. One that was so ludicrous that it made me laugh.

No real buildup and no way of knowing how the wife reacted. Need to flesh out your characters a little more.

I agree with a previous commentor; the characters need built-up and drama for Max effect. The wife was not heard from a muted by this author. Her plan and reaction to her husband taking the initiative to sandbag her and beat her at her own game would be highly dramatic and of course a juicy detail to the husband's wrath. It was great and it had blockbuster potential. Thank you for your effort!

This is unfortunately not a story, it is a summary of one.

because it reads more like a summary than anything else, it's pretty dry, and doesn't engage the reader. That could have been alleviated if there was actually any direct character interaction as well as dialogue.

Remember, show don't tell.

On another note it could also use a bit more proofreading, obviously, not much effort has been put into polishing it up.

This was truly infantile in all respects.

First Lit cheatin' wives tale I've read where the stud gets his dick chopped off. That's a rather harsh punishment for helping you dump a cheatin' wife, and kind of a turn off.

By the way, South African doctors just performed the first successful full penis transplant last year. They have lots of penis amputations there. Mainly, the black men have plenty of adult circumcisions gone wrong due to sepsis, etc. The guy in this case had it torn off in a motorcycle accident, though.

Can you spot the error in the first sentence?

It was well written and edited. As others have said, though, it was a little "bare bones". Fleshing out the characters, and a little background buildup might have

made the story stronger.

Just my 2 cents.

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- Guido and Sal should have brought Lamar's severed cock, (& added his balls) and shoved them down Anne's throat!

Thankfully it was not a sickening plot. The only trouble was that the story lacked any suspense. It was more of an epilogue than a full story. Typical suspense points in these stories are: is she cheating? Are they going to get a divorce? Is he going to take her back? There has to be something substantial at stake yet to be decided. Good work.

Someone said the cheating wife deserved 50 percent of the assets. Divorce rulings are so unlawful. If the husband is guilty of infidelity, the wife is guaranteed no less than 50 percent of assets, the family home, an automobile and insurance (payment free), full custody of children, child support and alimony. And other monetary awards from the court. But if it's the wife who brings about the destruction of the marriage, the cheating wife is still awarded 50 percent of the family assets, even if she didn't contribute a single penny to their bank accounts, she will be awarded a vehicle and insurance (at no cost to her), custody of any children will still favor her. The husband will be ordered to pay child support. In many cases, the wronged husband will also have to pay alimony, as well. In light of the injustice of divorce court rulings, I am surprised there aren't more murders of straying wives. As a jury member I could never find guilty a husband who ended the life of the man who, with malice aforethought, sought to bring about the destruction of another man's marriage.Not Guilty by reason of justifiable homicide.

into each life....there will be rain. TK U MLJ LV NV

It was short and I must admit sweet. Rarely in the stories I read hear does a husband come out of the deal feeling good about it all and WINNING! Refreshing from the usual sick sorrowful one I read (and admittedly am hooked on) that leave me rather upset. Good job. And off topic...a great airplane.

At least in this story. He is a real super guy! I'm surprised Corsair didn't have him conducting his own divorce as he had gotten a law degree in his spare time. This husband is so full of himself I'm surprised that he could do anything with all the shit he is spewing....If the wife got any kind of lawyer all his little bullshit of hiding assets would have been found out. He also gives construction workers a bad name. You can just tell what a class act he is in the way he talks about his new lawyer girlfriend. Like she would have anything to do with him...The husband sounds a lot like this bully I knew in college....just a loudmouth blowhard that in real life accomplished zip!

Why not just use bullet points, instead?

By all means burn the bitch, but this non-story format is bizarre. I agree with a previous poster that the Dickchop genre is a turnoff.

But thanks for sparring us the angst and self flagellation the virtue signallers would love to see all over this.

I'm more for BTB in the form of legal and realization of what has really been lost but this was a fun fiction.

Just the way I like to see them. Bitch completely burned down and the asshole boyfriend permanently removed from the picture.

The only thing that would make this better would be a narrative from the wife's side showing how she thought she was manipulating her husband and setting him up for divorce disaster only to find herself shot down in flames. Where would she be coming from? Remorse? Anger? Renewed admiration for the man she thought so little of? Lot of fertile ground there for us btb fans.

It might also be fun to hear how giddy Lamar would have been thinking just how great life was going to be when he got this stupid bitch to divorce her husband and support him as he's pumping away on that stationary bike just before the bat stuck and how he faced life after that with at least 7 other angry husbands looking to get thier turn to mash whatever was left of his worthless hide

BTB stories have a sort of poetic justice to them. Enjoyed this one. *****

I understand the point of Revenge but this was just flat-out overboard this guy should be committed to a psychiatric ward and brought up on charges imo

can do this, it is not the game which cuckolds or wimps can play.

Shall we draw up a list of felonies he committed?

There are no felonies in fiction. Just crazy and satisfying revenge.

Oh Yeah

I really like that fact that Lamar got just what I think these lotharios really deserve. They all need their big cocks shorten, lol! Any one of the complaining commenters on this story are just lotharios who are now covering their cocks with their hands to protect them, lol! Hey, us poor husbands are coming for you with our kitchen knives, lol!

Husband gets away clean with no regrets and a true sense of well being. The only thing wrong is the perfect bounce on the rebound into the arms of the first gorgeous woman he meets. Very unrealistic

Don't get me wrong ! I believe in as much vengeance as possible. . But ! Money and transactions CAN be traced . He would NOT have gotten away with half of what he came up with in the story . And YES he would have ended up in Jail . Great imagination though .

Classic Corsair. Great tale of being proactive against a very naughty loving wife.

I would have enjoyed it more if he had set the wheels in motion and then met with her to have "the talk." It would have been fun to hear her telling him about what he already knew, then for him to surprise her with her new situation. Nonetheless, it was an enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing!

I don't accept no friends or family,her parents would have stood by her.

Enjoying the current dry spell in LW, getting a chance to read some of the older stuff. This was a satisfying little fantasy, very enjoyable. Perfect justice when the AP, who knows the cheater is married, suffers permanent tryst ending damage.

I felt absolutely no sympathy for the 'hero'

He caught her cheating and spent months putting plans in place waiting for her to come clean (which she never - the we need to talk could have been announcing a promotion or pregnancy etc.).

Then all the rest, turn the town against her, OK, but if someone did that to someone I knew I wouldn't trust him either. If he's willing to do that to the mother of his kids, god know what he'd do to a total stranger.

He liked her parents and knew it would devastate them, but went ahead and did it, divorced for adultery and let her explain would have been enough. Again, with friends like that....

Must have thought a lot about his kids to send them pictures of their mother like that.

I had some time to execute a plan I had in place for just this day

Don't know about the US, but in the UK finances can and would be tracked back 7 years to show a pattern of income and disposal, likewise with the business accounts would have shown a plummet in profits. Likely he would have ended up in prison for fraud and ostracised around town in case he upset anyone and decided to take them down too.

As for Lamar, no sympathy there, but CCTV, it's present in every gym I've been in recently. But more importantly it was another convenience that he had friends that were expert in this sort of thing.

Along with the husband coming across as a nasty piece of work, there was just too much going on, too many holes and too many conveniences for this to hold any semblance of credibility.

...I like a good btb story, but some of this seemed far fetched. There's always paper trails that go way back showing assets acquired during their marriage including tax records on income, property tax records that show the house value, etc... so I dont think it would have been so easy to falsify all his asset value. Also, sending the photos to her boss so she got fired, meant no income for her, so he would be paying some hefty alimony. Also. The wife character seemed under developed and was just background noise. Liked the revenge on the boyfriend. Liked the concept, criticism meant to be constructive. Keep writing. 4 stars. Thanx!

Loklie

Good thing too otherwise she would have been rewarded instead.

It was BTB but never created a feeling of support for the husband. If anything it shows the husband to be less likeable. He knew his wife was cheating but did nothing to win back her love and then he ruined her life and the lives of her family out of pettiness. Not someone I would support after he aired his dirty laundry.

You cannot 'win' that kind of wife back. For what reason would a man want a deceitful horrible soul of a woman like that back?

There was nothing left to win back. If everyone deserted for her repugnant behavior after viewing the video, why would the husband want her.

Why the hell would anyone want to win back a cheating whore like Anne. Even before finding out her lover was a black manwhore who was screwing seven other cheating whores, who would take the bitch back. She totally earned the scorched earth BTB she received. LaMar lost his pride and his only asset. Perfect revenge on both.

I did enjoy your story. it was short and "sweet" lol I do sometimes prefer the wife to suffer more- not more in volume, but in explanation. to hear her suffer a little, to see if there is any remorse. ;0)

She was a cheating slut,he was a heartless turd. A marriage made in Hoboken! Seriously,this whole story was packed with stuff that could never happen in reality! ~ "There once was a cad named Lamar,who fucked white wives near and far,the husbands found out,castrated the lout,and he was discovered without his dick in a car!" ~ Not sure whether the author wrote this story tongue in cheek or,whether his tongue was planted between somebody's cheek.

most of it was over the top. But it was worth the read

A good outline. Ripe for someone with talent to flesh it out into a story.

Part about marrying the lawyer, I thought it was just great. Making the lover black was a bit racist and uncalled for as assholes come in all flavors.

I have always preferred the nuclear response to a cheating slut in all circumstances. I cannot for the life of me, figure out the writers on this site that constantly write the line "Iet her tell you what she did". Bullshit. This guy took the correct approach to getting the truth out.

No dialogue. Just “this happened”, then “that happened”. There are a lot better stories than this one on Literotica.

Unrealistic, but a great BTB nevertheless

Great BTB story when if Unrealistic.

Unrealistic but good. Had to suspend sense of reality to enjoy. Maybe that is the intent. Really a 4*, but giving it 5* to offset some of the anonymous nastiness.

Great BTB!!!

1. An editor would have helped with spelling and grammar.

2. A few of the more unrealistic things could have been left out.

3. How is it he avoided alimony? With her losing her job, even his apparent pittance of barely making ends meet would have gotten her something.

4. Ok, if this was intended as a fun poke at the btb genre, I went for it as if it was real.

Anyone who has been in this situation has thought like this, but reality is quite different. From a story telling point-of-view, it's hard to feel any real emotion when we don't know anything about their marriage, her, or him other than his taste for revenge. It reads like a cold-hearted husband married to deceitful wife and I wonder why either is worth caring about?

Ridiculous plot. Why didn't you just make the hubby a shape-shifting ninja with random invisibility powers? That would show a lot more imagination and probably be more believable.

D...U...M.....B.

Response to “ kitten eater” . Does not matter WHY she said they had to talk. She was cheating on him for quite some time, and he was financing it. You don’t get to have a boyfriend, and a husband that supports you. Why don’t all the “ liberated” cheating wives, give the husband a fair divorce, and be responsible for themselves. Isn’t that what “ liberation” is all about? Walk the walk!

1 star - bad idea and violence is never acceptable no matter what the circumstances.

Again. This is an OTT fantasy, but it’s a good one. The retribution for Jamal, I mean LaMar, is especially satisfying.

I like BTB stories but this is total bull shit. This dumb shit would split everything 50/50 no matter what he tries to hide so one star for this drivel.

I've not much time for cheating, but not much time for fraud either. It's another form of cheating.

I have to ask where's the beef? Not much of a story with a little more interaction it would have been pretty good

5 stars, with serious complaint.

Why was the Antagonist Black? It made no difference to the story. He could have been Irish, Swedish, Italian, etc. No change in the story! More "white fear" by an author? Or is this to agitate readers? Both?

In response to the previous ridiculous comment concerning a seriously ridiculous "complaint".

Oh me, another poor, poor negro victim. Type it again "Sam".

This is worse than ridiculous. Call it... inane. In fact, this story deserves an award for its really crappy plotline. The only question a reader has is: "Compost or flush?"

To the author:

You need educated about divorce real BAD.

recommend you take a course in family LAW.

Oh so many wish that they could have or do just that,

Don’t you love it when an extremely stereotypical big black clown gets precisely what he deserves?

Forget the ridiculous financial shenanigans that would never stand up in court, the next paragraph after he's given the PI her info, he's got the PI report>

Fun story for a fantasy revenge dream. Not so good for real life. The financials would land him in jail for fraud

and no real attorney would help with that stuff. As far as Lamar, the police would have sweated the MC more

than a few times. Sure, there were other suspects but everything of his divorce happened at the same time. Cops

don't like coincidences.

Very poorly written. Read like a police report. Not a bit of emotion.

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2 **

Ridiculous u can’t turn everyone against someone for cheating doesn’t happen unfortunately an hiding ure money would come back to bite u land u in jail an ure ex would get the lot lol

Going okay til hooking up with lawyer.

Usually I wouldn't give a one page flash story 5 stars but I liked this one, thanks.