All Comments on 'Build It and They Will Come'

Beautifully paced and sexy,

Nice narrative voice. : )

(I hope that now that a hint has been given as to the identity of the client (through the recurring "strawberries' motif), a continuation of this story might appear in the near future.)

(1 quibble about an apparent "type-o" (or inputting error): I hope that 1 conspicuous example of "virgin" with a "g" at its end may get edited sooner or later.)

Indeed, nice story. [Smile.]

E. ("nycreader").

or just a filling for breakfast, TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanks for the comments! I have written a few more chapters already and the next one has been submitted for publication. I'll keep expanding the story until either reader interest or my imagination runs dry.

Special thanks to nycreader for catching the typo! I don't know how that escaped the proofreading. I submitted the edit, and it's hopefully fixed in a couple of days.

You're welcome (with respect to a certain inputting flaw), "forctic_ax" (Our Author here). [Smile.]

(I didn't get back to Literotica until April 28th or 29th -- and the word still has a final "g" visible [Sigh] .)

I'm glad that the series is continuing (and that installment 2 is already available) . : )

Sincerely,

E. (in New York City).