All Comments on 'Builders Slut Ch. 04'

You are developing habit of making my panties extremely wet! Sitting here bored in my office I've just read this latest chapter, as soon as I've finished writing this I am going to go somewhere private for a bit of "me time"!

I so want to be you in this story! Can't wait for the next one Jenni x

Very hot, very sexy and dirty and erotically charged, infused with just enough mental and emotional observation to keep it from falling off the cliff. While there are some instances where 'speed to market' has allowed small errors to slip through, the overall execution is very good, the storytelling and pacing is great. And of course, watching your character slip into submission is delightful!

you make my cunt extremely wet. Its just oozing cunt juice. I have a naughty cunt now. White soppy juice spewing out.

But only gave 4. These are very good. Very, very good. Unfortunately in this chapter and the one before you occasionally interchange the men. Its.disconcerting when she starts out with Carl and suddenly he changes to Lee and vice versa. Please read.the story aloud to edit before submitting. If this truly an assignment I hope my critique doesn't get you in trouble.

very good a dream come true in fact,

This is thrilling and gripping (!!). Very well written too. Your words must generate wet panties and precum at the same time. Brilliant unisex sex x

It's good to see you letting your imagination roam free and start to explore the depth of your depravity. Keep it up!

Continues in the same erotic vein.... well written