All Comments on 'Building a Better Jessica Ch. 05'

by DeeperDown

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PlaytimeXXXPlaytimeXXX6 months ago

Super erotic. The surrender and mix of pain, hunger, pleasure is terrific. I imagine myself as Jessica and her tormentors, a perfect place to be.

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSover 12 years ago

I love it! I only wish they had pierced her lips all the way up or put in eyelets so her sex could be locked to keep her from self pleasure or to tie her in place etc. I hope to see lots more like these. thanks

ktmccollktmccollover 13 years ago
This is a great series...

...and I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Please continue writing

I've thought of using different words to try and persuade you to continue this story, but the other comments put it adequately... I really enjoy the story so far it'd be a shame if it were left like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Don't stop now!

You have got to continue this story and bring it to real conclusion. You have left us hanging!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

more please...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Love it

Please continue. I love the way you write!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

please write more chapters!

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