All Comments on 'Building my Way to Mom Pt. 02'

Very nice. Description of their joining was vivid enough for me to picture it.

I do hope you have more to come.

Yes I do

The words you list at the beginning don't have alternate words in English because we just copied them! The only exception might be 'blouse'.

This is such a great series. Love your work

One tiny inconsistency - I think you missed writing the part where the mother's sari/petticoat is removed/undressed from her lower half? Ignore if that was intentional

I anyway list them just to be safe. It was a suggestion by an editor of mine.

I wanted that to be interpreted by the reader when I wrote he threw her on the bed. In hindsight, I feel I should have mentioned that. Thanks for the suggestion