All Comments on 'Building my Way to Mom'

WTF?

Seeing Indian mom with shaved pussy makes an indelible impression on young lad. True emotions especially against the grocer. Good story

I acknowledge ANON's comment: WTF? Did you run out of something add? Why end your story so abruptly? You deserve a lot of credit for your story as it is obvious English isn't your native language. There were occasional typos but not too detracting. Consider making your stories end with better conclusions in the future.

I'm sorry if the ending seems abrupt. I'll take that into consideration the next time. This was supposed to be a multi-part series so this isn't the end. Thank you for your feedback.

When is next part ?

I’m working on it. I’ll try and release it ASAP

Great story ! Do u have a timeframe for when pt.2 will be out ?

I’m waiting for the moderators to approve my story. Once they approve it, it should be added to the site.

BHONSADIKE!

RAJESH PANDIT'S (A HINDU) WIFE NAME IS SHEEBA (A MUSLIM)?

ARE YOU NUTS OR WHAT?

Looks like you downloaded the wrong Mirzapur

These are lust stories....not torture stories.....

Go smash someone else's hand....maim them....make them unabot to work.

With a little luck YOU can end up in jail.