All Comments on 'Bullseye: A Target Romance'

by amazingrace69

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hplitprincehplitprinceover 9 years ago
Hot!!

Interesting style that you chose, was slightly difficult to read through bouncing between perspectives, but overall a very hot story from any perspective!

HoosierFriendHoosierFriendover 9 years ago
That was really neat!

The ping pong narrative (I just coined that) Many writers do it - poorly. You make it work. And wouldn't it be nice if all road rage incidents could be settled with such amicability. (I don't think I have used that word before - may never have occasion to use it again.) Thanks for a fun story.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffover 9 years ago
Great Story

I loved this story.

I am now 71, but I still have a robust sexy fantasy sexual world that keeps my mind functioning.

I have had several similar stories happen to me when out shopping.

I never followed thru with any of them.

But I felt the spark & I will forever wonder: WHAT IF ??

Thank you for this tale.

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