by amazingrace69
Interesting style that you chose, was slightly difficult to read through bouncing between perspectives, but overall a very hot story from any perspective!
The ping pong narrative (I just coined that) Many writers do it - poorly. You make it work. And wouldn't it be nice if all road rage incidents could be settled with such amicability. (I don't think I have used that word before - may never have occasion to use it again.) Thanks for a fun story.
I loved this story.
I am now 71, but I still have a robust sexy fantasy sexual world that keeps my mind functioning.
I have had several similar stories happen to me when out shopping.
I never followed thru with any of them.
But I felt the spark & I will forever wonder: WHAT IF ??
Thank you for this tale.