All Comments on 'Bully Moves in Next Door Pt. 01'

Another pathetic pretend human has been added to the swamp, congratulations are in order!

I loved it. Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

Fantastic! Really great build-up, the characters are really developed. Even though the son is the narrator both the mom and bully can be clearly imagined are not just stereotypes. Really great, can't wait for the next part! If I would give one suggestion, which is not criticism in any way, and not really a suggestion as much as a little request, it would be more detailed descriptons of the mom's clothes. Again, great story!

Soo another story about a slut of a mother I guess that's normal now

Try doing something original like the suffering the consequences of betraying her son.

Not the usual plot line for sure---but interesting. You did a good job with the characterization and it was good enough that I felt sorry for her son....and sadly, things like this probably happen more than we would like to think!

Nice story. I can't wait for the rest.

It was very hot

Unrealistic.

He never tell his mother about the bullying.

After being hit,he could've called the cops.

Nope,don't like it.

i can't wait for more

Not much of a mother!

3

Finally a good ntr story about a mom fucking son's bully behind bis back! I hope they keep fucking behind his back while he is watching, expecially her blowjob. It would be more hot If the bully makes fun of him (Always behind his back) while She Is sucking his big cock. Maybe She can fuck even her son's best friend. Keep going step by step, please! Good job!

Great story

People leaving negative comments, the story obviously isn't for you, go read your vanilla tumblr blogs

Oh just great, another ntr freak author pens a heap of drivel.

perfect premise. don’t hold back in future installments. torture the son more, and have the mom get more enthusiastic about fucking her son’s bully. 10/10 execution. keep going

This is great erotica but please don't go into "Torture our protagonist" mode. It's cool to have the Bully use and manipulate the mom, but let our dude somehow escape scar free. I don't need to see some shit like Bully costing him his job or turning him into someone who gets turned on by his mom. Let the sex continue but not at the expense of our narrator

I thought this was going to be a pretty derivative “bully fucks mom” story when I began reading, but it surprised me! Thought this was great. Could’ve used even more of the section where Stanley negs the mom, driving her even more wild for his cock. The final sex scene was terrific and a perfect encapsulation of the trajectory of all 3 characters. You also did a great job showing how the cuck son’s panic about Stanley only translated as whiney and rude to the mom. Overall great job and can’t wait to see how Stanley takes advantage of Julie next

so hot cant wait for stanley to fuck julie and i hope his fathsr would fuck her too

Please be a story where the bully's life gets ruined and the mpther suffers in the end.

Good story and build up to the bj, looking forward to the next chapter. Would be hot to get some of Julie's POV during her interactions with Stanley before they hook up again.

Great story!

please keep going!

Awesome story

A really terrific and enthralling story with a great build up of tension. This has been composed with care and is deserving of all the positive comments.

Can't wait for the rest of the chapter's

1st. - i'm a slut for my son's bully ((( andibob69 ))) ,,

2nd. - bully came to dinner ((( PerilEyes ))) ,,

3rd. - bully gets whimps mother ((( Psiberdreaming ))) ,,

4th. - the bully ((( thehumpman ))) ,,

5th. - taken by two boys ((( onustwo )))

* after reading this story it takes over the 2nd. slot .

along drops everything else going down *

Delightful. Thanks!

Super start to what looks like being a great story. 5 stars

Well written with an excellent build up. And shocking (to the narriator) self discovery. But one nagging problem for me is why the kid never said anything like, right after they met he could have said, 'yeah he use to bully me in highschool."

Incredible